Music Video Rough Cut 2 and Feedback - Ashley

Music Video 

What works well 
Amber looks fab 
The flares in a darker setting is better 

Things to improve 
Wobbly camera at the end 
Continuity - are they meant to be arriving/leaving the party during the day? 
Still want to see her crashing the party and looking outrageous You can tell Megan says " get it out of my face" in relation to the flare! Plus why is Olly on his phone in one scene? 
Focus on some shots at the end - the focus is out

Audience Feedback
- I liked the flares scene, because it added a dramatic atmosphere to the music video and made me feel like they were acting reckless and outrageous. However, i didn't like the the door knocking because it looked like it was in the day and also you wouldn't knock when you were gate crashing a party, like the lyrics stated she was. 
- It was beautiful and i enjoyed watching it because it was unique and i was intrigued to find out more about the story line of the music video. 
- The narrative was unclear between the main characters. It looked as though it was awkward between Danny and Amber (the tow people who played the main characters) it was also unclear who was an extra and who was a main character. Another part of the video you could improve was the entrance of the main character, When Amber came through the streamers no one looked, they all had their heads down and didn't take any notice of her entrance. This doesn't link to the lyrics of how she was crashing the party because no one looked as though they knew who she was.  
- I liked the scene where Amber was in front of the white screen. This made the music video looked as though it was very professional and gave it a realistic feel of a music video. I also liked the connection between the explosion of the balloon and the fall of purple glitter. This matched to the lyrics of "purple glitter flying through the air" however, I feel they could have added more glitter to make the purple glitter more prevalent. 
-The set of the party, including all of the decorations eg. the balloons and the lights, fitted well with the story line of the video and made it clear what was happening. This made the story line easier to follow as the sets and the locations used where clear and gave an indication of what was happening. 

The Audience feedback we received will definitely help us with creating new scenes and improving the video we already have./ With all of this Audience feedback we have also been given the chance to see what our target audience really want and what they would find most entertaining if they saw it in our music video. By gaining this audience feedback it will also help us in making specific scenes clearer and help us magnify the story line a little more as our audience feedback found that people found our narrative a little unclear. now that we have gained an outside opinion it means that we will now be able to act on the feedback we have received, from both our target audience and our teachers we will be able to make the best video we possibly can.